It is difficult to learn a new language.
There are many reasons why people have many troubles to learn a new language.
First, we feel lots of cultural difference. It is difficult to understand new language's structure and a way of thinking
In addition, We don't usually use English in our ordinary life. So we are apt to forget it. And in the end, we decide to give up learning a new language.
Finally, we need lots of patience because it takes a long time to learn a new language.
Because of these difficulties, we feel many troubles to learn new languages.
Wednesday, April 16, 2008
It is difficult to learn a new language.
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The topic and conclusion sentences are so similar and the structure of supporting sentence is hard to understand. but the paragraph's connection is good. Reading your writing, I am pointing out some mistakes in the structure, expressions, grammar and spellings. I want to revise as the following that.
At first, this phrase "ⓐ have troble with learning new languages" should be changed into " have many troubles to learn a new language. Next, the sentences of "ⓑ diffrence of culture result in various difference. example, it is word order and thinking of language" look like talking about difference of culture, language's structure and a way of thinking. so, in order to make the proper expressions should be changed into "we feel lots of cultural difference. it is difficult to understand new language's structure and a way of thinking".
Also, if you change "ⓒ it's not use ordinary times so forget and give up to learn new language" into "we have no enough time to learn a new language, so it is difficult for us to continue," it would be better. And the sentence of "ⓓ for learning new languages need a long time and the patience" is proper to change into "we need lots of patience because it takes a long time to learn a new language. At last, the sentence of "ⓔBecause of these, peoples feel many difficulties to learn new languages" should be changed into "Because of these difficulties, we feel many troubles to learn a new language. "
Thanks for your reading.
From your studying friend.
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